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Unformatted text preview: paraphrases (or quotations) from the readings, a related experience that is personal (only one per essay)-- that relate to the point? Do any paragraphs need further development by adding information? 4. ( E ) Does the writer explain clearly how the examples, experience and/or paraphrases or quotations used relate to the point of the paragraph? 5. Evaluate the organization. Does the paper “hang together” as a whole (seem well-connected?) How can the writer strengthen the connections between ideas in the essay? STRENGTHS TO WORK ON FURTHER...
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This note was uploaded on 10/08/2011 for the course ENG 209 taught by Professor Staff during the Spring '11 term at S.F. State.
- Spring '11