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tools innovation etc.
13．To make myself more insightful, I now need training in a broader theoretical framework,
·105· 成功留学文书写作必备 which is why I am now eager to pursue further studies in your distinguished program.
Admittedly, my GMAT and IELTS scores are not among the best, I hope you can
appreciate that my work is very busy with successive projects. I had really hoped to do
better, but I hardly found time to prepare. As for my English ability, I often took part in
foreign exchanges activities while at university. I made friends with students from the
USA and communicated without difficulties. My unsatisfying IELTS score of 6.5 might
have been caused by years of lacking practice. I plan to sit the test again on February 2003.
However, I hope you will give some consideration here. I have a strong will and deep
dedication to take part into your Master’s program. Your strong academic atmosphere is a
real attraction for me.
14．In my philosophy, a perfect painting is produced by strong will, original ideas and gifted
talent. The same qualities apply to do something better. It is my hope that upon the
completion of my studies with you, I will be able to contribute to the modern finance of
China. I believe that, with further opening, China's finance industry will have more
chances in its economic development. Although there are problems that we meet every day,
I would like to introduce a word by Dave Coulter, the former president of bank of America,
to all those who believe banks are the last dinosaurs, I would like to say “welcome to the
Jurassic park!” Facing numerous challenges, I have high ideals in this area that I love. I
may open a consultancy company or become an analyst in the future. I only got to know
that we will become powerful and fearless when we master the essence of human beings
and knowledge. That is just what I hope you will be able to give me in the coming
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