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Unformatted text preview: 那本备受推崇的英文写作畅销书“the Elements of Style”中所提倡
的，让每一个字都发挥其作用“Make every word count。
”他们说： Words such as rather,
pretty, very, and little, are the leeches that infest the body of prose, sucking the blood of words.
We should all try to do a little better, we should all be very watchful of this rule, for it is a
rather important one and we are pretty sure to violate it now and then.”如果以此为标准斟酌
1．原句：Having been involved in theater arts activities for many years, on a wide variety
of levels ranging from high school to independent repertory theater, I have
naturally gained a fairly comprehensive acting experience.
修改后：My knowledge of acting comes...
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