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Unformatted text preview: from high school productions and independent
repertory theater work.
2．原句：I have an intense affinity for learning in a liberal arts environment that has
extensive course offerings from which to choose.
·120· 第 1 部分 自 传 修改后：I want the choices that a liberal arts education offers.
3．原句：Owing to the admirable presentation and leading in the Community Volunteer’s
Association, I was awarded the “Honor Citizenship” by the local government.
修改后：The local government awarded me the title of Honor Citizen for my outstanding
work in the Community Volunteer’s Association.
4．原句：What made me pleasantly surprised was that at the end of the lecture, I was
raffled as the only lucky one in the whole assembly room who would have the
privilege of attending a language training center for GRE training free of
修改后： was surprised at my luck in a raffle to be the only...
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