Unformatted text preview: to explain what the point of the essay was as well and I am not sure if I did that correctly. I also had a difficult time making my essay 5 pages without adding in extra unnecessary details that add fluff. I really liked the first assignment. The second one, not as much. I loved the way the authors we read in the text wrote their persuasive essays but am unaware of how to do that. The class discussion on the World Trade Center confused me; I was unsure what the purpose was. I know it had something to do with the first essay but I am unsure what. I was very pleased with my grade on my first essay and hope to continue to write as well as I did for that. I struggle with grammar and I think that is what lost me points on the first essay, and probably will on the second essay as well. I tend to write how I speak which never turns out right. I will discuss that with you during our conference....
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This note was uploaded on 10/17/2011 for the course ENG 101 taught by Professor Stanish during the Fall '07 term at SUNY Buffalo.
- Fall '07