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Unformatted text preview: think those problems affect them personally. This proposal does a great job of making it seem as though there is at least one problem that will really affect the person reading it. If the reader sees the issues as problems that only face other people, they are less likely to be willing to give funding to the grant. Weaknesses Energy The grant proposal is very informative, but it seems to lack the energy that suggests a passion for the programs. It lists problems and benefits, but it seems to lack inspiration and enthusiasm. Clarity The amount of information the grant proposal gives the reader is outstanding, maybe a little too outstanding. The proposal is full of charts and statistics. After reading it, I felt like many of the stats all blended together. I knew the proposal had given me a bunch of information, I just felt like some people might not be able to remember what that information was by the time they were done reading....
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- Spring '11