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Axia College Material Appendix G Peer Review Checklist * What is the main point of this paper? The main point of the paper is Gun Control What is the greatest strength of this paper? The greatest strength of the paper to me is showing how you would go about getting registered to be a gun owner. What material does not seem to fit the main point of the paper or does not seem to be appropriate for the audience? I personally did not see anything that did not fit in the material of the paper. I think the paper flows and fits together. Has the author sufficiently addressed counterarguments? Explain your answer. I think there are some counterarguments because the author does explain what it takes to get your gun permit as well as showing how owning a gun could be beneficial. Where should the author add more details or examples? Explain your answer. I think maybe if the author was able to show how many people die
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Unformatted text preview: from a gun shot wound a year would be something she could play off of when it comes to a counterargument. Where is the writing unclear or vague? I thought the paper was very clear and could understand where the author was going with her writing. What is your favorite part of this piece of writing? My favorite part of the paper is the illustrations where she is showing the child holding a gun. Then she goes on to tell about fire arms needing to be locked up with children around. What other comments can you provide for the author? Very good paper would like to finish reading when the full paper is done. com220r3 *Adapted from Reinking, J. A., Hart, A. W., & Von der Osten, R. (2003). Strategies for successful writing: A rhetoric, research guide, reader, and handbook (6th ed.). Boston: Prentice-Hall/Pearson Custom Publishing. com220r3...
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