Unformatted text preview: roommate I was able to get a couple more quotes from him when I wanted to expand on a topic. Overall, I believe I did a much better job on this paper with the revisions and editing I did. I am happy that you give us the opportunity to revise our papers. Thank you very much!...
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This note was uploaded on 10/24/2011 for the course AERO 141B taught by Professor Tasista during the Winter '09 term at Santa Clara.
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