Appendix G Com 155 - Appendix G From the five paragraphs...

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Appendix G From the five paragraphs presented, the first and second articles diversity is of particular interest. By comparison, the second piece of writing is the most effective because the sentences are all coherent with one another, making it much easier to understand the main idea. Unfortunately, paragraph one presents too many short sentences in sequence that make the writing seem plain and effortless. The rhythm of the writing in paragraph two keeps a continual flow as well as partnership between each sentence. The words blend smoothly and work together without choppiness. Instead of using the same words repeatedly, every sentence begins differently, which proves the authors consideration in choosing a variety of expressions. The author in paragraph two is aware of the specific audience reading the article and writes the text with the audience in mind. The articles writing is clear making it easy to recognize the main point of the subject.
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This note was uploaded on 10/24/2011 for the course XBIS 219 219 taught by Professor Craigbowles during the Spring '11 term at University of Phoenix.

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Appendix G Com 155 - Appendix G From the five paragraphs...

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