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Workshop 5 - Adam Samaan Christopher Burnette First...

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Adam Samaan Christopher Burnette First Impressions My first impression on your essay about Maya Angelou and her expression is that you have put forth a lot of time and effort at this stage. Overall the paper is coherent and clear with minor details that can be touched up. I think the main idea of the essay is looking through a historical lens to see what motivated Maya Angelou’s work. I also think you are in a very good position because you already have met the length and citation requirements. In my opinion, the strongest part of your paper is the paragraph focusing on the poem, “On Working White Liberals” and the analysis you give on race being her motivation. Reread/Revisit First Impressions A) After reading your essay for the third time I still believe that your main argument is the motivating factors in Maya Angelou’s work are race, feministic expressions and oppression. You do a good job on supporting this idea through influential quotes, research and profound analysis on the meaning. B) At this stage I think your paper is rather strong because you have proved your
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