EmmyGuillermo Draft Response

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Research Essay Draft Response You should spend at least 30 minutes on each draft. Please be expansive and thoughtful in your comments. Try to make comments that you think will help the writer revise. Revision literally means “seeing again.” Nancy Sommers has found that when experienced writers revise, they often radically alter their idea and reorganize the entire essay. By contrast, when student writers revise, they change a few words here and there but leave the essay essentially unaltered. Help your partner become an experienced writer! She or he has several days to revise, so you can make comments that demand— and direct—a true revision. (That said, please be kind.) Please also give me a copy, either in hard-copy form or via e-mail. Directions As you carefully read and re-read each essay, draw a squiggly line under awkwardly expressed sentences and phrases whose meanings are unclear. Write marginal notes to the writer on anything that puzzles you. After re-reading, write a letter to the writer in which you address these questions:
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