week9assignmentfinal - After reviewing sentence three and...

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After reviewing sentence three and sentence five, number five was more effective in getting the point across. An easy read paragraph that gave a strong main idea. From that, the paragraph also had strong supporting factors, which is important in any paragraph. The sentence structures had good rhythm that could keep the reader interested from start to finish. It made good connection with most readers, since mast families cruise through life without at some point struggling with debt. I do not believe many people can avoid debt entirely. The writer explained that the cost of daily living let alone unexpected expenses makes dealing with debt difficult to maintain. They gave many ideas regarding why debt is so difficult to avoid. However, it makes one wonder why things like unexpected costs are not included into the budget. He or she knows certain bills have to be paid, so those are put in the budget. Why not do the same for unexpected costs. I know that one cannot know exactly how much they are but having
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This note was uploaded on 10/26/2011 for the course COM155 com155 taught by Professor Rebecca during the Spring '10 term at University of Phoenix.

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