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Welcome to WritePoint, the automated review system that recognizes errors most commonly made by university students in academic essays. The system embeds comments into your paper and suggests possible changes in grammar and style. Please evaluate each comment carefully to ensure that the suggested change is appropriate for your paper, but remember that your instructor's preferences for style and format prevail. You will also need to review your own citations and references since WritePoint capability in this area is limited. Thank you for using WritePoint. In my [Avoid use of the first person (I, me, my) in academic writing unless writing about a personal experience. Check first person use with your instructor. ] paper, I will be taking the position that opposes the Healthcare Reform bill. I am against this bill because there are too many loopholes amongst the writing of the bill. Now, [Avoid using "now" merely as a thought-word implying "in this case" "in that view," etc. If you mean literally "At this time," remove the comma after "Now"] government covered disability insurance will be drafted [The passive voice is a form of "be" (will be) and a participle (drafted). Over-use of the passive voice can make
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