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Unformatted text preview: Thesis statement: In 2010 The United States Government passed what is known as the Health Care Reform bill, making an already complicated life for disabled Americans more complicated. Though each of these points I feel are important, the fact that disabled Americans have to purchase their own policy is the most troubling about this new law. Many handicapped individuals face financial trouble to begin with, now handicapped people have to worry about purchasing insurance or pay a fine. This is why I put it in the number one slot. I chose to list things from most important to least important, which may or may not be a good strategy. I might juggle things around and put the most powerful point towards the end, as this might give the reader a very strong point to finish with. I also tried to finish each point with a strong supporting sentence as it completes the topic strongly....
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- Spring '11
- health care reform, insurance policies, disabled Americans