Revision Practice - After reading over the sample paper, I...

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After reading over the sample paper, I have thought about the changes I would make in order for this paper to be very successful. The first change I would make is the length of the paragraphs. The paragraphs seem to be a little too short so I would add more information and details to it to give it a lengthier structure. I would add some in-text citations so that it can have some quotes in the paper so the readers can locate the original information quickly and easily. Another thing I would change is the font and its size because if we are supposed to follow “The Short Form Writing Style Guide” I would change those errors so that it can go buy the guide. Some of the errors that he made were not only in the paragraphs but also in the presentation in the beginning that needs to be corrected as well like the title page, the headings, and other errors that his missed when it comes to writing a paper. I was shock to see that he didn’t have those errors corrected because that is the first area that the
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This note was uploaded on 10/27/2011 for the course COM 156 taught by Professor Hampton during the Fall '10 term at University of Phoenix.

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