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I’ve wanted to go to the Zoo; but no everyone I talked to and asked never wanted to go with me and always said that I was to old to go there. Well really I didn’t care because I’m a fan of animals and I love animals because they always seem to entertain me. I was set to persuade someone to go with me before the summer was over. However it was going to be a lot harder than what I thought. My family and the friends I hung out with on a daily basic became my audience and the people that I had to appeal to. At first I just tried asking. Saying “Mom it would be a good little family trip for the family.”; well that didn’t work. Every time a commercial came on for the Zoo I would pause the television until mom came into the room and then I would hit play and make sure the volume was up just so she could hear it. That’s when I got in trouble for having the television to loud and well that approach didn’t work out either. I had given up for awhile in hopes that maybe she would mention it to me; didn’t happen! So after weeks went by I finally saw another commercial for the Zoo and decided maybe I should try again and perhaps beg a little. I went to my mom and
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This document was uploaded on 11/02/2011 for the course ENG 111 at Miami University.

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