WEEK 9 ENGLISH ASSIGNMENT revises

WEEK 9 ENGLISH ASSIGNMENT revises - Composition 155 Week...

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Composition 155 Week Nine Assignment Review of Paragraphs 2 and 4 After reading paragraphs two and four, the fourth paragraph was the most effective because it went into specific detail about how a credit score is calculated, while also defining and explaining what this means for the consumer. In the fourth paragraph, the rhythm in the author’s writing allows the reader to maintain interest throughout the entire paragraph, and to understand the topic clearer. Reading it was similar to reading a poem or song, it was perfect sentence structure and explained clearly the point of view while ensuring to keep the reader interested with the way the words were displayed by the writer. I also felt that the author did an excellent job maintaining variety by eliminating being repetitive, even though he was giving the readers information that was similar; percentages. Feedback From WritePoint Using WritePoint was extremely informative, and the following are some examples of writing error found in my first paragraph.
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