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Unformatted text preview: Ban boring sentences!
Ban There are a few ways to
stop your sentences
putting everyone to sleep.
putting s Add words in. The mouse ate cheese.
The greedy mouse quickly ate the hard cheese. s Let’s look at another. The man got in the car.
The serious man carefully got in the sporty car. s You could also change words! The man got in the car.
The gentleman climbed into the Ferrari. s Let’s try one more. The monkey ate some fruit.
King Kong gobbled plenty of bananas. So to improve your
sentences you need to…
sentences s Add new words.
s Change some of the words.
Change some of the words. •
Go on give it a try, I bet you CAN do it! ...
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This note was uploaded on 11/04/2011 for the course EDUCATION 320 taught by Professor Professorlemont during the Fall '11 term at BYU.
- Fall '11