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What feedback did you receive from the CWE, your peer review, and your facilitator? -The feedback I received from the Center of Writing Excellence is mainly grammar errors and a few sentences to be taken out or reworded to make more sense. From my peer reviewer I got that I need to add more information in a few spots and change some stuff to make it clearer and put in a good counter argument. Also the facilitator stated that I need to add for more information, a counter argument, and correct the first, second, third person throughout the paper. Explain what feedback you will incorporate and what feedback you will not incorporate
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Unformatted text preview: into your paper. Include a rationale for your choices.-I will incorporate all of the feedback I got for this paper. If I can do this my paper will make more sense and all fit together. It will add more to my paper to make it better all together and will help people see what is going with media and eating disorders. All of the feedback was very good and helped me see what I need to improve on. Having this feedback will help get me over the hump I usually get stuck on when I start writing. I find that once I get the feedback I can figure out where in my paper needs more in to get it were it needs to be for grading....
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This note was uploaded on 11/06/2011 for the course ACCT 231 taught by Professor Shan during the Spring '10 term at Allen University.

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