Paragraph two gave an excellent insight to the issues that most Americans face with the credit card industry. The author’s brief explanation of the concerns of the credit card industry was written clearly and easy to understand. The sentences contained variety and supported the subject in a manner very well. The paragraph was an interesting read as well as engaging. The subject of the paragraph is an interesting subject that makes it easier to read. The author’s method of writing was very effective in proving the main point. The grammar style and lack of errors aided in keeping the writing interesting. This paragraph is a great example of writing a successful paragraph that includes supportive sentences that help prove the main point. By following the author’s example one could learn how to write a successful paragraph. In future writing using this author’s method will help to write a successful paragraph. The Write Point feedback gave some good suggestions that made sense however included
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This note was uploaded on 08/07/2011 for the course EDUCATION 101 taught by Professor None during the Spring '11 term at University of Phoenix.