Unformatted text preview: presented a minimal amount of information on the subject of outstanding debt. He or she did not provide enough credible references to support his or her point. He or she should have provided more information and references about many reasons of how a person often denied credit because of too much debt. I do not think the author did a very good job of pulling together good information. I would recommend consumers to obtain a clear idea of what their credit rating is and not how to become overwhelmed with debt. The author did have a decent sentence variety and rhythm in the second sentence; “Individuals who are near limits on existing cards, have too much outstanding debt or too many accounts overall, have a history of late payments, charge-offs or bankruptcy are likely to be denied credit.”...
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- Spring '10
- Credit rating, outstanding debt, decent sentence variety