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Welcome to WritePoint, the automated review system that recognizes errors most commonly made by university students in academic essays. The system embeds comments into your paper and suggests possible changes in grammar and style. Please evaluate each comment carefully to ensure that the suggested change is appropriate for your paper, but remember that your instructor's preferences for style and format prevail. You will also need to review your own citations and references since WritePoint capability in this area is limited. Thank you for using WritePoint. Paragraph 1 [Write out numbers under 10] The issue of developing a good credit rating is an important one because it can affect a person’s financial security and stability . The author [If this means yourself, avoid referring to yourself in the third person; if this is a personal account, use the first person (I, me, my)]
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Unformatted text preview: presented a minimal amount of information on the subject of outstanding debt. He or she did not provide enough credible references to support his or her point. He or she should have provided more information and references about many reasons of how a person often denied credit because of too much debt. I do not think the author did a very good job of pulling together good information. I would recommend consumers to obtain a clear idea of what their credit rating is and not how to become overwhelmed with debt. The author did have a decent sentence variety and rhythm in the second sentence; “Individuals who are near limits on existing cards, have too much outstanding debt or too many accounts overall, have a history of late payments, charge-offs or bankruptcy are likely to be denied credit.”...
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