Paragraph 2 final assignment week 9

Paragraph 2 final assignment week 9 - and sentence variety...

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Paragraph 2 I reviewed the feed back from WritePoint and made corrections to “ does not lose your WritePoint suggested [Eliminate second person (you, your) in academic documents and avoid addressing the reader directly. Use third-person pronouns (he, she, it, they)] However, WritePoint also suggested that I correct “ The author” [If this means yourself, avoid referring to yourself in the third person; if this is a personal account, use the first person (I, me, my)]
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Unformatted text preview: and sentence variety [may need an article (probably "a") before "variety"] I do not believe that either needed to be corrected. WritePoints feedback was helpful in reminding me not to use second and third person and if so to use them correctly. Also, it suggested that I make a correction to them [Check pronoun agreement--if "them" refers to "someone" (or a singular subject), it should be singular, too (him or her)...
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