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Unformatted text preview: and sentence variety [may need an article (probably "a") before "variety"] I do not believe that either needed to be corrected. WritePoints feedback was helpful in reminding me not to use second and third person and if so to use them correctly. Also, it suggested that I make a correction to them [Check pronoun agreement--if "them" refers to "someone" (or a singular subject), it should be singular, too (him or her)...
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- Spring '10