The essay in Appendix C, “The Dark Knight” in my opinion needs several changes. The introduction paragraph, “ The Dark Knight was the most popular film of 2008. Unlike most popular summer movies it was also considered to be a quality film and was thought to be a contender to earn an academy award nomination. Ultimately that honor was not bestowed on the film, but its popularity and ability to elevate the comic book film, which is rarely associated with quality storytelling, remain.” This introduction paragraph does not catch the reader’s attention nor does it coincide with the rest of the essay. It should be placed in a different location of the paper. I took a look at specific parts of the introduction, like the opening sentence and your thesis statement, and ask myself a couple questions; does the opening sentence catch the reader's attention? I do not believe that it does catch the reader’s attention. Then I asked myself whether or not the introduction accurately present what follows in the essay? I also do not believe that it
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This note was uploaded on 11/21/2011 for the course COM 156 COM 156 taught by Professor Dr.jessicaguire during the Spring '11 term at University of Phoenix.