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Unformatted text preview: A statement A photo-radar camera on the corner of Main Street and 33rd Avenue in Phoenix must be installed. Ineffective Too narrow Photo-radar cameras must be installed in highly congested traffic areas. Effective Broader The Iraq war has been expensive. Ineffective A fact The Iraq war has not been cost-effective in terms of human life or monetary expenditures. Effective A supportable opinion Movie moguls do not care about making family films. Ineffective An exaggeration Diminishing movie revenues could be bolstered by producing more family films. Effective A reasonable point The benefits of online learning. Ineffective Incomplete sentence Online learning provides numerous benefits to adult learners. Effective Complete sentence Sections Paragraphs Introduction (thesis statement) Paragraph 1 Body Paragraphs 2-4 (support for thesis statement) Conclusion (restatement of thesis statement) Paragraph 5...
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