Unformatted text preview: • 2 out of 3 community college students leave without a degree. • Average college tuition has gone up about 62% in the past 20 years. Thesis : Opportunities for educational achievement are limited due to the high drop out rate amongst college students and the increasing price of tuition. Body Paragraph1 : Working students can be overwhelmed by their jobs and the college experience and sometimes dropping out seems to be the only option. Body Paragraph 2 : If a student is not employed, the drastic rise in the price of tuition almost forces them to get a job. Conclusion : Our system of higher education is inadequate because it stays away from the basis of learning. They are so concerned with money that learning doesn’t matter anymore. MONEY...
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- Fall '08
- English, 20%, 3%, 4 hours, 2 year