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Unformatted text preview: I tend to make my conclusions a summary of the essay, but it tends not to flow with the essay. This essay was an interesting one to write because I got to learn more about how my dad created rocket fuel and engines. I think that this essay is pretty good, not great. I think that I got across what it was my dad does but I had some trouble connecting him to his job. My essay is a little bit choppy, I need to work on the transitions and the conclusions...
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This note was uploaded on 11/26/2011 for the course BRAE 134 taught by Professor Truelson during the Spring '11 term at Cal Poly.
- Spring '11