English 134 Essay II Memo

English 134 Essay II Memo - I tend to make my conclusions a...

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Brad Rogers Professor Truelsen English 134 30 January 2010 Memo This essay was really easy to start but then became much more difficult throughout the end of it. In the beginning it was very easy to come up with enough to say for the paragraphs, but I began to run out as the essay went on. The last paragraph might sound a bit repetitive and the bland. The conclusion was also another thing that I had quite a bit of trouble with. In general I have a lot of trouble with my conclusions.
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Unformatted text preview: I tend to make my conclusions a summary of the essay, but it tends not to flow with the essay. This essay was an interesting one to write because I got to learn more about how my dad created rocket fuel and engines. I think that this essay is pretty good, not great. I think that I got across what it was my dad does but I had some trouble connecting him to his job. My essay is a little bit choppy, I need to work on the transitions and the conclusions...
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This note was uploaded on 11/26/2011 for the course BRAE 134 taught by Professor Truelson during the Spring '11 term at Cal Poly.

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