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April 6, 2010 I am doing the exercise where you have a partner, in this case my friend Deirdre, read my paper and underline the sentences that need to be re-written. I like this because then she can point out which parts need to be re-worded so that they make sense. I like having other people’s views on papers. I like having as much feed back as I can so that I can make this research paper as good as it can possibly be. Also, writing out the sentences in many ways broadens my views on how to write the paper. It can make it more interesting. “We manage our physiological well being through nutrition and power naps”, when nutrition can’t supply the energy we need states Kellman. ****Kellman says that, “We manage our physiological well being through nutrition and power naps”, when nutrition can’t supply the energy we need.****
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Unformatted text preview: Kellman says that when nutrition cant supply the energy that we need “We manage our physiological well being through nutrition and power naps”. The way to fix anorexia athletica comes from eating healthy foods The way to fix anorexia athletica is to eat healthy foods. ***Eating healthier foods is one way to fix anorexia athletica.*** . I feel that everyone should have the knowledge that they have and that they should because in the end, a lot of more athletes would be better off and a lot healthier. ***In the end, if everyone had the same knowledge about anorexia athletica, more athletes would be healthier and safer form getting g this disease.*** In the end, more athletes would be safer from getting this disease if more people had a larger amount of knowledge about this disease....
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This note was uploaded on 12/02/2011 for the course COLLEGE WR 112 taught by Professor Melissacarrere during the Fall '10 term at UMass (Amherst).

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