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Unformatted text preview: What went well in this essay for me was an overall theme for my interview and profiling of my grandmother. As I said, I obviously already know a little about her and her life! What also went well for me was overall quote integration. I also felt I was able to connect all aspects of my grandmothers life to her as a media producer. What did not go well was interviewing someone who lives 4 hours away. However, this was a small issue because I was able to conduct the interview by phone. A little side note to that: shortly after I interviewed her, my dad was able to set her up with a webcam. Now I can talk to her over Skype all the time! She loves it and we have used it already to further discuss the interview. Another thing that did not go well was trying not repeat myself in my essay. I tend to that, which my peer editors noticed. With their help and advice I hope I was able to cut down the repetitiveness! Enjoy the essay and Thank You! Sincerely, Olivia Nixon...
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This note was uploaded on 12/05/2011 for the course ENGL 134 taught by Professor Martinelston during the Fall '08 term at Cal Poly.
- Fall '08