Unformatted text preview: write. There are no other thoughts I would like to share because I mentioned everything I wanted to in this paper. The feedback I received during my revisions was to pretty much rewrite the whole paper because it did not have a controlling idea. I made use of this feedback by focusing on one main idea and rewriting my paper. This helped me come up with a better-finished product. The type of feedback I would like from my reader is honest feedback. I think the reader should point out the strengths as well as the weaknesses in order to help the writer better their paper....
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This note was uploaded on 12/17/2011 for the course ECON 101 taught by Professor Chapman during the Spring '11 term at Arcadia University.
- Spring '11