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Unformatted text preview: audience, which I feel was a huge element of my diary entry as well. On the contrary, I noticed that my partner focused more on the text and writing in her ad while I focused more on the images and visuals. After reading my partners analysis, I felt as though she did a successful job in applying each point of her analysis back to the audience of the ad. She kept the message and audience in mind consistently throughout her paper. One thing I noticed that could be improved in her paper was her development of ideas. I felt as though some of her points started off very well, but she failed to dig deeper and elaborate on what she was trying to say. If she would have explained her analysis in a more in-depth manner, her diary entry might be a little bit more compelling....
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- Fall '10