pancakes cm - Hi, Meghan: I hope you save this essay for...

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Hi, Meghan: I hope you save this essay for your children; I think they’ll like the story of about their grandparents and uncles, and they’ll like to know the role pancakes played in your life, especially if you make pancakes for them! I haven’t worried about grammar or proofreading much here; I have marked a few things that could be clearer, including a couple of structural things about transitions. However, I notice that you could be more rigorous about editing and proofreading, and I hope we’ll get a chance to work on it together this semester. cm Pancakes are my dad’s favorite. He says the best thing about them is that you can have them for any meal, and they give you energy. Before a tennis match or a big exam, he fires up the skillet and prepares to make his famous pancakes. As I sit on a stool at the marble countertop, I watch him grow excited to cook for me. It is a funny sight to see; he seems like a young boy fascinated by life. He adds his “secret ingredient” to make the pancakes more fluffy. After pouring the batter into the skillet, he asks if I prefer chocolate chips, bananas, or blueberries in my pancakes. Flipping them over and over, he
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