Unformatted text preview: or think," it is a cliché and vague; use "believed" or "thought". The second suggestion was for a writing suggestion. They stated that “real" or "really" means "existing in actuality"--it adds little to the meaning (and using it to mean "big," "very," or "genuine" is slang); and that I should replace it with a more expressive word. The last one was to simply remove the word the from the sentence. After rewriting the paragraph I found that my paragraph does make better sense after the suggestions from writepoint. After using Writepoint for this assignment I found it to be very useful, so I will be using it in my future classes. I think the overall process was kind of easy to get to and submit my paragraph. The feedback time was rather fast but this may have been because I had an extension on my assignment! I think the reply back time was maybe 4 minutes. I plan on using Writepoint for every paper in the future!...
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- Spring '10
- Writing, Thought, 4 minutes, Writepoint