Final com155 (2) - Paragraph four gave more information...

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I chose to read paragraphs four and five for the final assignment. While reading the two paragraphs i felt that paragraph four was more effective of the two. I feel that paragraph four was written better and it flowed nicely. Paragraph five was a bit confusing. It didn't quite flow as nice. I found myself reading it a few times before i really understood what was being said.
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Unformatted text preview: Paragraph four gave more information that was very understandable and well formed that makes its easy to read and to understand. Paragraph five wasn't written with complete thoughts and kind of hop all around the paragraph. So out of the two paragraphs four was the better written one of the two....
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