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Unformatted text preview: were saying. You weren’t shy or scared and made the speech sound smooth. You even paused a couple of times to give the audience time tot ponder the information that you delivered. There was even one instance where you paused to give a dramatic effect that worked brilliantly. You also glanced at the audience making eye contacted making it seem as if you were talking to me individually as opposed to a large group of people. As great of a speaker that you are, you did use the word um often. It is difficult avoiding this word but for the future just try to use it less often and try to gather your thoughts in a more collaborative manner. Also try not reading off your note cards so much because it got me disinterested when you kept bobbing your head down to tread the note card and then back up to give the information. It made it seem like you were trying too hard. But other than that you did a great job and really invited the audience into your speech....
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This note was uploaded on 01/12/2012 for the course COM 225 taught by Professor Ferderer during the Spring '08 term at ASU.
- Spring '08