Unformatted text preview: recognize your points of interest, defined words that the reader might not know, and best of all you gave explanations about the bicep curls to explain even further to the reader about what it is exactly that you are talking about. In the first sentence of the second page put the parenthesis around pectorals as well as chest. Phrase it as “So it is general.…. . work one muscle (pectorals or chest).” Your first paragraph on the second page is filled with great information which you broke down to help the reader understand what you mean. Great job with the analysis thus far. The second paragraph is very informal. Your essay is awesome, straight and to the point. It is a well written work and from a critique point of view, you wrote a fantastic paper....
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- Fall '08
- Writing, Jonathan Salk, Terry Bishop- Writer, mean. Great job