Revision Exercise 2 - ship. Weakness: Revision: d Since I...

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REVISION EXERCISE 2: ADAPTING THE MESSAGE TO THE AUDIENCE Revise the following sentences by adapting the message to meet the audience’s needs. Identify the specific weaknesses in each sentence. a We want all employees to be familiar with OSHA requirements as they pertain to their jobs. Weakness: Revision: b Each project manager must complete the appropriate performance evaluation forms before being awarded his raise. Weakness: Revision: c After the recent downsizing, most employees are beginning to feel like rats on a sinking
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Unformatted text preview: ship. Weakness: Revision: d Since I look a leadership role on this project, the teams performance has improved. Weakness: Revision: e The best computers we can lease through corporate channels are horribly outdated. Weakness: Revision: f The supervisor asked Quan to go back and make revisions to the final draft of the report so the data will be completely accurate. Weakness: Revision:...
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This note was uploaded on 01/13/2012 for the course ITC 105 taught by Professor Martin during the Three '11 term at Charles Sturt University.

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Revision Exercise 2 - ship. Weakness: Revision: d Since I...

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