Unformatted text preview: transitional sentences are not quite good. 4) Her conclusion part came too suddenly and was short. She could have added some sentences of taking action for caving. 5) The knowledge part seemed a little bit long. The subject of this speech should be caving, a kind of sport, but I think she told too much about caves, which made for the caving part, she did not have time to give sufficient caving information. I think she was a little out of the track. Anyway, I learnt something from her speech. She acted like a professor, which I like. As a students without any experience of caving, this is pretty good....
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This note was uploaded on 01/14/2012 for the course TECOM 320 taught by Professor Ann during the Spring '06 term at SPSU.
- Spring '06