Unformatted text preview: that you don’t want to make blanket statements and conclusions, but maybe you can use stronger words so it doesn’t seem like you’re not sure what its supposed to mean. You end that paragraph with the fact that a wonderful can be open to interpretation for the reader. Maybe you should have given your input as to which interpretation was more appropriate or better argued because just ending on that doesn’t really give the whole paragraph much closure. I understand that the ambiguity and multiple interpretations is supposed to strengthen your argument, but I don’t think you can be somewhat sure that that was Emily dickinson’s purpose. I think that is something you should definitely say is true by the last paragraph because for one, you proved that throughout the entire paper, and also if it’s not true then most of the arguments are bunk. In general though I think it is a very good paper....
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This note was uploaded on 01/16/2012 for the course ENGLISH 124 taught by Professor Peck during the Fall '10 term at University of Michigan.
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