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Unformatted text preview: area I need to improve on is not using the second person in my writing I have a tendency to use you and your a lot in my writing. One way I have found to correct this is having other people read my draft and make suggestions on how to revise the essay and I have also found Writepoint helps out when it comes to the mechanics of the essay. I believe these are the two biggest issues I will have when writing my essay, but if I take my time and focus on the writing I should be able to easily correct the issues....
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- Spring '11