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Unformatted text preview: where transitions are needed. 7. Within paragraphs, does each paragraph have a specific focus, indicated by a topic sentence? Mark on the essay any paragraphs that do not have an effective topic sentence or that have organizational problems within the paragraph. 8. Which paragraphs need further development? What parts of this essay do you want to know more about? 9. Does the writer provide SPECIFIC evidence for the claim(s) he/she is making in the essay? Does the writer make any claim that is not supported by evidence? If so, describe here: 10. What is the authors tone? Is the tone appropriate for this assignment? Overall 1. What does the writer do particularly well in this draft? 2. What does the writer most need to work on improving for the next draft?...
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- Fall '07