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Unformatted text preview: school having to set standards is perfectly reasonable, and Ryan uses analogies to show this. She makes sure to include Ryan’s emotion appeal by including American liberty and also by including the innocence of a child. She states that Ryan’s emotional appeal at the end of an argument is a good placement. She also makes know that Ryan answers counterarguments for his first thesis but not for his second thesis. She then lists the counterarguments for the second thesis and states that it might have hurt his paper. Other weaknesses are the length and the inability to discuss the issue in the amount that is need. Ryan does put a solution but does not explain the solution. She then concludes her analysis by going through all of Ryan’s strong and weak points in the article....
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This note was uploaded on 01/17/2012 for the course ENG 2304 taught by Professor Allman during the Spring '09 term at Baylor.
- Spring '09