Jeffrey Chen’s draft analyzed by Andrew Lazarow

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Jeffrey Chen’s draft analyzed by Andrew Lazarow 11/1/09 Does the WRITER: 1. Provide a rich, detailed description of the image? I would try to paint a better picture in the readers mind. Make it so that even if they can’t see the picture, they can imagine what it looks like. 2. Identify the genre, pitch, complaint, and moment of the image? Genre- Photo Journal Pitch- The homeless can have computers too Complaint- People believe that homeless people don’t own computers Moment- June 4 th 2009 3. Move beyond description to provide critical analysis of the image, explaining the unintended (as well as intended) social, cultural, and political implications of the image? I really like how you get the reader’s attention by explaining the situation in our culture and then bringing the photo in as defense. 4. Address the “so what?” of the image? You have the right idea to start explaining the “so what?” of the image. As long as you continue with you outline and explain what the internet can actually do for the homeless it will be good. 5. Avoid cliché and vagueness?
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