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Hi, your paper is really too short it needs to be three full pages minimum excluding the pictures. You also need to make an argument specifically about the pictures, not the cities and you need to describe what is in the pictures a bit more. Don't forget to talk about the sepia vs colored picture,
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Unformatted text preview: it will help you link your argument about the city to its depictions. Finally avoid personal pronouns like "we". Hope that helps, Claire...
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This note was uploaded on 01/20/2012 for the course ENGL 101 taught by Professor Butler during the Fall '08 term at South Carolina.

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