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Writer’s Memo For inquiry 5 I will be writing about my revisions and changes to inquiry #3. Using examples from the text I will show the drastic change from a rough draft to a final draft. I will also use this paper to help show the reader examples of how my writing has progressed over the years and how I have improved. I chose this paper because I think it provides very strong examples of the editing and changes I make from a rough draft to my final draft, which are changes I may not have made in high school or even at the beginning of the semester. I also think inquiry #3 is a great example of how my writing has progressed because it required me to research peer-reviewed articles, cite them, and find genuine information from them in order to complete the paper. All of these things help show not only how I transformed my inquiry #3 paper. I will conduct my analysis in just a chronological order that just follows directly on with my paper. I will go through each major section and outline the changes that have been made and why I made them, but also why they show I have changed as a writer over the years.
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Jeremiah Gordon English 111 Andy Buchner 12/15/2011 Inquiry 5 Starting off with the introduction paragraph numerous changes can already be sighted. In my introduction paragraph in my rough draft I make the statement, “while Windows has attracted a more data-crunching/dweeb connotation from consumers.” Then
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This note was uploaded on 01/23/2012 for the course ENG 111 taught by Professor Patterson during the Fall '07 term at Miami University.

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