MELISSA PROJECT DESCRIPTION peer review

MELISSA PROJECT DESCRIPTION peer review - Blanche Phlaum...

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Blanche Phlaum 11/19/09 Rws 305 Peer Review Melissa’s Project Description News Update The news update is well written and only requires a few minor changes in order to be perfect. The news update has the proper information that is required in order to be a successful project description. The news update has a proper headline, lead that explains why the event was important, details of the main event, background information of our organization, consequences that explain the significant of the event, and comments. The news update has a headline that tells readers that Seeds to Success held the grand opening of a community gardens in El Cajon. I think that this heading is appropriate because it gives readers a brief description of what event took place. The news update provides readers with information about the status of our project. In the first paragraph it talks about the most important information of opening a community gardens in El Cajon this is a good lead. It gives details of the day our NGO opened a community gardens. It focused on a specific event which
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This note was uploaded on 01/23/2012 for the course BUSINESS IDS301 taught by Professor O'byrne during the Spring '09 term at San Diego State.

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