Unit 7 Critique Assignment

Unit 7 Critique Assignment - October 10, 2009 CM225-11AU...

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October 10, 2009 CM225-11AU Tosha Collins Unit 7 Critique Professor Bradford Kaplan University
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The two strengths that I was able to identify in this paper were the references and the information provided. The paper read well and was the correct amount of pages required for the assignment. There were a lot of references, which meant that there was a lot of time put in to accomplish this paper. The APA format was apparent and I did see some parenthetical in text references as well. The subject matter was discussed well. It did not bore me because of all of the facts that were presented in the paper. I found the paper to be organized. When reading it, it flowed with the topic and you didn't get lost when a new paragraph was presented. The two areas in need of revision would be the use of the references and the lack of a thesis or introduction. Even though I wasn't lost or bored, I had to really read the paper in order to understand what you were writing about. While having many references to refer to, the paper read as if it were just
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