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Unformatted text preview: had solid marks, the lack of revision did not harm your overall portfolio. For style, try to vary your sentences just a touch more in structure, length, and in their beginnings. For grammar and conventions, there are still a few grammatical mistakes, and I can overlook most of them, but— for conventions—MLA format must be used: a Works Cited page is must for the literacy narrative. But these a small complaints. You’re doing a great job. Keep it up!...
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This note was uploaded on 01/30/2012 for the course ENG 1113 taught by Professor Irwin during the Fall '11 term at University of Central Oklahoma.
- Fall '11