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Unformatted text preview: solutions were problematic. The lead expressed the main details of the article and inspires the reader to continue reading, to see what the solutions are. The article I read in The New York Times is titled “A Broadway Superlative for All the Wrong Reasons.” The article is about the issues that the Broadway musical “Spider Man: Turn Off the Dark” has experienced since its conception in 2005. The lead into the story is extremely vague and requires the reader to have previous knowledge about the shows issues. It also gives the impression that the show will open on March 15, when in reality the show’s opening has been delayed till summer. The lead lacks clarity Tyler Ales Dr. Erin Coyle MC 2010 17 March 2010 and accuracy. It does not give any information to uninformed readers and does not draw you into the story....
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- Dr. Erin Coyle