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Khoa Tran DW 0306 MW Ms.Miller November 12, 2008 A. The Continental Airline belong of the America, Continental have many location on the world. Problem: 1. Take off The 2. Changes belong of the to is an and America, Continental they to American company, and they. 3. Change on the o around the and place period after world Correction: Continental Airlines is an American company and they have many locations around the world. B . Usually Continental use the English language to communication with all the traveler, and they serve American food. Problem: 1. Capital Usually and place comma after usually 2. Change communication to communicate 3. Take off all the and place s after traveler 4. Change support the to they serve Correction: Usually ,Continental use the English language to communicate with travelers, and they serve American food.
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C. but Continental have limit handbags for each traveler sometime Continental charge for over limit so expensive each lb. Problem:
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Unformatted text preview: 1. Take off but, have, and of 2. Change handbags of to bags for and capital Sometime 3. Change charge to plural 4. Bags over limit so expensive each lb change to bags that are over the weight limit can be when taking luggage . Correction: Continental charges for bags that are over limit the weight so company can be expensive when taking luggage. D . The China Airline is belong of the Asia Airlines ,China Airlines is the one bigger Airline in Asia about travel . Problem: 1.change belong of the to an and place company after Airline and change one bigger to largest . Correction. China airline is an Asia Airline, company China Airline is the largest Airline in Asia about travel. E. China Airline have fewer limits for baggage for each traveler compared to continental and dot have charge fee for over limit. Problem. 1.have change to has and change handbags to baggage 2.plave compare after traveler ,and place they before dont...
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