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Unformatted text preview: ENG302/f11i Edit 2 Due: 1/24 Points: 6 After 1/24 minus 2 points After 1/31 zero points No revision This assignment fulfills this goal and objective. Goal Significantly improve their ability to write effective/business/ professional communication Objective Produce clear, concise, effective audience and purpose specific Activity Edit 2 Assessment Rubric Directions: Complete 5.5, 5.7, 5.10, and 5.11 p. 142 and 143. Answers will vary. You only need to write the revision. 5.5 Audience Relationship: Bias-Fee Language p. 142 Directions: Substitute a better phrase for each of the following. Example: a. Original: For an Indian, Maggie certainly is outgoing. Revision: Maggie certainly is outgoing b. He needs a wheelchair, but he doesn’t let his handicap affect his job performance. c. A pilot must have the ability to stay calm under pressure, and then he must be...
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- Spring '10
- general manager job, Message Composition, a. Original